Friday, November 11, 2011

I am a soldier

I am a soldier.
I fight for freedom
I defend my region
When I went to war
My life was torn.
So here I lay in Flanders fields
Where poppies grow and soldiers are remembered
For what they have done.
I hear the guns around me and think
Is there still a war?
Remember me, I fought for you.
By Krishna
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5 comments:

  1. shelbyNovember 17, 2011 at 7:32 AM

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  2. shelbyNovember 17, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    You did a great job Krishna. I like how you chose your very detailed words.

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  3. HannahNovember 20, 2011 at 3:39 PM

    Great job Krishna, I like the ending.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 22, 2011 at 7:23 AM

    Krishna it is touching for me great job!
    From Ashleigh

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  5. AnonymousNovember 22, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    wow, krishna you are a great writer. I really like your poem.

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