It was a bright sunny day in Planet Doodle Bop, and there lived an alien named Jimmy605. One day he was doing the laundry in the river and he was washing this yellow shirt it has seven arm holes because Jimmy has seven fat blue arms, three skinny pink legs and 16 stinky feet. One day I was sent to planet Hillcrest by my master softpaws04.
So there I went in my ship called the Bright Stars. Then my ship landed I was on a huge school I called my master “Hello it is me Jimmy605 I am on Hillcrest I am about to go inside I will report back to later”
I went into the school and this weird thing stomped by me it only had two arms, two legs and two stinky feet. Then this really loud annoying noise started and all the things ran outside and they stood in marching lines.
Then it was almost the end of the day and all the things jumped into these big yellow beasts then they got pooped out into black dust.
I got a call from Softpaws04 he said my mission was over and he is sending Bright Stars for me right now. So off I went back to my planet and I had to tell my master all about it he thought it was pretty crazy. Then I went to my house and sat on my soft couch, and had a nice cup of cold milk, and I thought to myself what a day.
THE END
By: Mackenna
I liked how you used lots of description
ReplyDeletethat was awsome i ioved it!!!
ReplyDeleteyour story was very descriptive when jimmy605 was reporting back to his home planet doodle bop
ReplyDeletegrace
That was pretty interesting.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
Jordan .R.
I like your story because it has alot of descriptive words
ReplyDeleteI like you ended your story.from krishna
ReplyDeleteMackenna, I liked how you used lots of description on the jumped into the yellow machine part
ReplyDeleteBrayden!!!