Friday, January 13, 2012

Mouse Story Lead Paragraph

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  1. Trouble In The House.

    One day a mouse named Micky came to a park he was tired and hungry. Then he saw a man down the street. "Hey. Maybe he can let me stay at his place? " said Micky and off he went. It was a while before they came to the house. The man had black hair and brown skin. He wore a black shirt and light grey pants. " When he opens the door, I'll run in and hide in a hole or something...

    Jordan Foulds

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  2. The Guy...

    I Charles.Q.Mouse woke to the sound of thumping. I didn't know what it was. But i did know where it was coming from. I peered through a small crack in the floor and saw a guy thumping on the wall. Then I heard him bellow,"I think my house is infested with mice!" By the way, I live in the attic at this guys house. Them i remembered my son, Maddox was looking for scraps to eat! He must be the one scratching! I looked around and paniced. When i looked back through the small crack in the floor, the guy was nowhere to be seen....

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